Lesson+Plan+Addendum

_____# of microfiction 1. Did you find any pronoun/point of view oversights? 2, Type the added sentence. 3. Was the added sentence effective in clearly demonstrating the point of view of omniscient or limited omniscient? How? 4. Which point of view does the microfiction use now? (A) omniscient (B) limited omniscient
 * First, students gave each other feedback regarding the point of view revisions using the form below. this rubric assessed students' revisions and critques. **

Next, the following rubric assessed students' revisions: Sentence was added _____ 3 points Mechanics and grammar _____2 points Clear point of view _____2 points Changed person of all nouns/pronouns _____3 points Agreement by readers with point of view _____4 points Posted on wiki _____2 points

and critiques: Added sentence comment _____2 points Correctness of pt. of view classification _____2 points Pronoun inspection accuracy _____2 points Critique submission _____3 points TOTAL _____25 points Comments: